After our first attempt at creating a package and link on Christmas shopping failed due to lack of time, our camera running out of battery and no script we decided it would be best to try again.
This time we allowed ourselves enough time to get a script together and actually plan what we were going to do. As well as this we had time to edit our package and link until we were happy with it. My group and I decided we wanted to include more than we had managed to last time to make our package and link appear more realistic.
The whole group helped to write the script making sure we used short and simple sentences that would grab the audience’s attention. My main role was actually being in front of the camera and carrying out the interviews on screen. I spoke about Christmas offers in Boots and then interviewed different people who didn’t mind being on camera. This was quite difficult as hardly anybody wanted to be on camera and some people just ignored me when I asked if they would mind being interviewed. I also found it difficult when I didn’t know what I was meant to be saying so I learnt that if I read the script just before I am meant to say it and keep repeating it in my head it normally worked out well.
I also did a voice over which was placed over different clips of Farnham shoppers and decorations. I feel this worked well, however because there was a handover from Anna who was creating the link on camera, with the microphone quite far away from her. To me doing the voice over off camera, with the microphone right next to my mouth, the change in volume was quite dramatic. Next time I will not hold the microphone that close to my mouth.
As well as this I edited the package and link so that my voice over went with the images being shown on screen and any bits we messed up could be removed. I did the editing simply because I know how to use Premiere Pro and I was able to quickly cut and edit the bits we did or didn’t want. Nevertheless we did have a few technical difficulties as the computer kept breaking on us but after a few tries I eventually edited it and we all put it on our blogs.
Seeing as we had a second try most of things I would have done better we did in our new one although there are still a few things that could have been improved. For example, the filming of the Christmas decorations and Christmas shoppers wasn’t very good as the camera was not steady. I think we would also improve the volume problem we had in the handover from Anna to me. Another major thing that I would improve was the ending when I lift up my script and read from it as you can see it on screen and it doesn’t look very professional. Next time I will learn my script so I do not forget my line.
I noticed when writing the script for television we would write a bit then when I tried to read it back I would get all my words muddled or run out of breath. This was because when writing it we was writing how we would for print, detailed long sentences, with little punctuation. However because I kept reading it back we knew what bits didn’t work so we learnt to stick to short, simple sentences with lots of punctuation to make sure I had time to breathe and to slow down my speaking.
On a whole I feel that our second try at creating a package and link was quite successful and I was very proud of what we had managed to put together.